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                     <h2 class="text-4xl font-bold text-white">Maksym Buz</h2>
                     <p class="text-xl font-medium text-cyan-400 mt-1">Senior Application Engineer</p>
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-                        With over 7 years of experience, I specialize in delivering exceptional technical support and robust turnkey solutions. My expertise in Bash, Python, and Linux allows me to execute complex deployments with a focus on high availability, disaster recovery, and process automation.
+                        For more than seven years, I have specialized in building resilient and efficient IT environments. By mastering Linux, scripting, and database management, I execute complex deployments that prioritize high availability, ensure business continuity through robust disaster recovery plans, and streamline operations via automation.
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             <h2 class="text-3xl font-bold text-center text-white mb-6">Professional Experience</h2>
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-                A results-oriented engineer with a proven track record in both corporate IT and specialized product environments. My career is focused on enhancing system reliability, automating complex processes, and delivering high-value, turnkey projects that solve real-world challenges.
+                A versatile engineer with a proven record of enhancing system reliability and operational efficiency in both corporate IT and product-centric environments. Expert in process automation, systems integration, and leading the end-to-end delivery of high-value technical solutions.
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-                    <p>Led the end-to-end delivery of enterprise-grade monitoring solutions, ensuring stability for high-stakes client infrastructures.</p>
+                    <p><strong>Orchestrated</strong> the full lifecycle delivery of enterprise-scale monitoring solutions, guaranteeing stability and uptime for mission-critical client infrastructures.</p>
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-                    <p>Developed robust automation scripts (Python, Bash, Ansible) that significantly reduced manual deployment times and operational errors.</p>
+                    <p><strong>Engineered</strong> robust automation frameworks using Python, Bash, and Ansible, drastically reducing manual deployment times and minimizing operational errors.</p>
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-                    <p>Managed and synchronized critical business systems (CRM, HR), performing complex database upgrades, migrations, and root cause analysis (RCA).</p>
+                    <p><strong>Directed</strong> the integration and management of core business systems (CRM, HR), executing complex database migrations and upgrades with a focus on data integrity and performance.</p>
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-                    <p>Acted as a key technical resource, mentoring team members, assisting sales with expert insights, and delivering public webinars as a certified trainer.</p>
+                    <p><strong>Served</strong> as a senior technical authority, mentoring engineering teams, enabling sales with key technical insights, and representing the company as a certified trainer in public webinars.</p>
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